3 verse, short poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, Jan 31, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    Walking along, walking along
    Walking beside you all day long.

    Pausing to stare for a little while
    Hoping to catch that smallest smile

    Walking along, walking along
    I walk beside you where I belong

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    Yes, I know its really short, read the title next time =D
     
  2. Shuya

    Shuya Member

    You should keep writing.
    I tried to relate that to my life, and as usual, it worked, I should really stop doing that.

    Have a happy day :anony:
     
  3. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    Lovely poem, short and to the point.
    When we are with a loved one, no need for words.
    Thanks for that. x
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Very insightful poem hugs
     
  5. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    Wow, didn't know it would be POSITIVE comments... Anyway, it's a good surprise and thanks for the comments, I mightt just continue writing short poems.
    Maybe.
    :biggrin:
     
  6. Ed.

    Ed. Well-Known Member

    This reminds me of when me and somebody I love went out to get pizza one day and when we were walking home I glanced at her through the corner of my eye and she was smiling a big smile, probably because she had a pizza in her hands, but such a smile was so rare for her.
     
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