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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by TinkerLoop, Jul 6, 2008.

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  1. TinkerLoop

    TinkerLoop Well-Known Member

    under my skin
    through my shell
    past that grin
    lies a painful hell

    do you hear my screams?
    do you hear my cries?
    can you see the streams,
    running from my eyes?
     
  2. butterflies32

    butterflies32 Well-Known Member

    I can see it and your pain in your poem. It is moving.

    Sam
    x
     
  3. liveinhope

    liveinhope Well-Known Member

    hugs thats so moving hun and it says a great deal
    here if u need to chat

    take care hun
     
  4. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Heya... I'm only a pm away if you wanna talk about anything... :hug:

    TDM
     
  5. TinkerLoop

    TinkerLoop Well-Known Member

    thanks guys
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: thanks for sharing
     
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