4 Verse Non-Traditional 5-7-5 Haiku (Closed Casket)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Mar 4, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Poetry In Motion Picture

    stained page of my life
    not my doings but of his
    he said he’s sorry

    his heartless actions
    i’m now alone in silence
    victim of my trust

    smell of burnt sulfur
    a quick flash of blinding light
    now my soul finds peace

    closed casket displayed
    falling rain serves as their masks
    the betrayer cries
  2. OneDesire

    OneDesire Member

    Hi Julia =)

    It's me, Emma...
    (decided to join after all...)

    I enjoy your poetry!
  3. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I quite like it. They format makes it all the more interesting. :)
  4. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Thank you TheStainRemaining and Emma.

    Emma, yeah this is a good safe place to share. F.Y.I. One thing about this site, only critique if you are asked to. Welcome to the site.
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