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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kayla19, Nov 30, 2008.

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  1. kayla19

    kayla19 Well-Known Member

    i haven't written a poem in the past 5 years. this one just kind of came out. it's crap, which is fine. i just needed to stop myself from doing something stupid and i thought i'd share...

    Broken heart, empty soul
    Nothing left for you to hold.
    Ravage me, destroy me
    I deserve the pain.
    Punish me not and
    I will take your place.
    Cut after cut, crimson streams
    Flowing down
    Reminding me that I will
    Never be good enough.
     
  2. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Im glad it stopped you doing something stupid and I also like , well done:smile:
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing :)
     
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