A Beautiful Suicide (Might trigger but don't think so..)

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  1. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    Disheartened Child - (Might trigger but don't think so..)

    Alone I walk in lonely streets,
    listening to my sullen heartbeat..
    I mourn as pouring rain falls,
    wondering how did I lost it all..
    I watch as the motions go by,
    just staring at the gloomy sky..
    Thinking of how it could’ve been,
    and things that I should’ve seen..
    Why am I feeling all these blues?
    Does the heavens have any clue?

    Everybody seems cold and untrue..
    Does living have to be so that cruel?
    I have always been deprived of love,
    I wish I can fly away like a dove..
    Somehow my sadness still remain..
    This loneliness will drive me insane..
    I can see that I am now at life’s end..
    Anyway, my life’s always damned..
    I have lost all my dignity and pride..
    I guess I will rejoice only in suicide..
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  2. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    very good, well written
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I loved reading your poem. It is deep and it is very emotional. I like the way that you worded it as well. Thank you so much for posting it and sharing it with all of us. If you ever need to talk send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as possible. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
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