A broken life: A poem about my family life

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by 18 and in trouble, Oct 26, 2011.

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  1. 18 and in trouble

    18 and in trouble Well-Known Member

    A broken life

    A broken home

    A broken dream

    A soul crushed

    A boys cries out

    Nobody can hear him

    There screams drown him out

    He keeps crying for help

    He feels his life not wort living

    He has planned his end

    And is ready to carry it out

    He keeps crying out

    They finally hear him

    They say they'll change

    Minuets later they are back at

    They keep going on and on fighting

    They boy feels betrayed

    They went back on their word

    They'll keep fighting no matter what

    Maybe life just isn't worth living
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    My heart aches for you hun i hope soon you can move away from this toxic place What i used to do was write down on paper how i was feeling sometimes i would leave it for people to find to make them more aware of how their actions was affecting me
    Keep posting hun okay just know someday you will make a life of your own a more peaceful one hun hugs to you
     
  3. 18 and in trouble

    18 and in trouble Well-Known Member

    Thank you I'm happy to hear that and I am trying to do that. I will and thanks
     
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