A Cavity in Mind.... (This is my first post, new here)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by HalfBlind, Apr 15, 2008.

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  1. HalfBlind

    HalfBlind Active Member

    I'm new to this site and I thought I'd post this poem to get a feel for how the site works, anyway...

    A Cavity in Mind: Written by a Zombie...

    I used to be someone,
    Or something.
    I used to belong,
    Somewhere.
    What I am now,
    I don’t want to know.
    Where I am,
    I can’t see.

    I used to be loved,
    By someone.
    I used to love life,
    At some time.
    Does anyone still know me?
    Do I still know myself?
    Will this nightmare ever end?
    Am I still alive?
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it!:smile:
     
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