A crappy poem

Discussion in 'Self Harm & Substance Abuse' started by Jade24, Sep 24, 2016.

  1. Jade24

    Jade24 Member

    It might not make that much sense without explaining so;
    I said something my legal guardian didn't like so she screamed at my and hit me multiple times with a closed fist. All I did was try to shield my face. I didn't even get up. Any ways this is the poem I wrote right after it happened.

    Blood and Mascara

    1
    Left
    2
    Right
    3
    Left
    4
    Right
    Glasses fall to the floor
    Buy not a single tear will go down with them
    Or at least not with witness
    The door shuts and everything collapses
    But in a seconds notice I can pull it all back together
    For now everything spins and crashes
    Then a graceful twist and slide of a (mod edit: guidelines)
    A headache pierces my temple as hard as the hits I took
    While the screaming voice in my head begs me to end the pain
    I whisper "I'm okay" as grayish tears pour onto the floor
    I collapse into the mess I made
    "Please help me"
     
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  2. lightning05

    lightning05 Well-Known Member

    That poem isn't crappy at all. It has real emotion in it and I am very happy you shared. I hope you continue to use writing as an outlet. I also hope that you are safe. *hugs*
     
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  3. IdontMatter111

    IdontMatter111 Well-Known Member

    I agree with the above comment. Its very good and quite poignant. Keep going with it. <Hugs> Hoping things get better for you. You do not deserve to be treated like that. :(
     
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  4. curtis

    curtis Active Member

    this is really good, you should write more
     
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