A few raw work.in progress

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  1. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    (untitled and incomplete)

    Good Night my sweet angel, rest your weary head
    Your night has just begun in the valley of the dead.
    That light that once was in your eyes is guiding us poor souls
    To make this mortal plane remember, and not be sorrowful
    Sleep in peace my darling, forgive us for our grief
    We could not see the pain you hid deep underneath.


    (untitled)

    I've stood here once before
    I've seen it all, felt it all, heard it all.
    But once again it cuts in deep

    The sound so sharp, like a knife
    A dagger in my ear
    Who is that girl who begs and pleads
    Whose is this misery

    The coldness upon my flesh
    Chilling to the bone
    Who is that girl laying there
    Still as she can be

    The sight so cruel, so painful
    Repeats again for me
    Who is that girl so broken,
    So lost within her pain

    Who is that girl who begs and pleads?
    Whose is this misery?
    Who is that girl laying there?
    Still as she can be
    Who is that girl so broken?
    Lost within her pain...




    These are both works in progress,
     
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I do love the first one alot the second one is very sad but good works in the progress yes very much so
     
  3. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    In memory of an angel

    A sweetest breath you stole from me
    Hangs upon a thread
    Glistening in the morning dew
    Swaying with the breeze

    A touch so gentle upon my skin
    Silky soft and smooth
    Touching deep in my heart
    My soul is throbbing too

    A tear to shed, just for you
    Flows into a river
    All that's left is the memory
    Of angel lost and loved
     
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