A goddesses divine.

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  1. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    Another set of lyrics that I recently wrote.

    Empty eyes stare deep into the endless void.
    A drawing gaze that no man can avoid.
    Trapped within the appearance of a goddess pure.
    A sirens call that mere intervention cannot cure.

    She is the fire that burns without a soul
    The black abyss that swallows mankind whole.
    To feast on the flesh of mans weakness

    My soul was bound to a live of servitude.
    Never freed again to tasted the pleasures
    Of unburdened freedom, a life I led in vein

    Must please my addiction – A goddesses divine.

    Many’r man tried to resist her temptations
    All would fall to her infectious seductions
    Bound in chains, lapdogs to her every whim
    She sits strong as every life is but a grasp within.

    Tearing through hearts without remorse or pity
    Her eyes met mine, felt like the hammer of hell hit me
    Sensations of purest ecstasy and lust rushed through me
    I knew from that moment onwards that I would nevermore be free

    She is the fire that burns without a soul
    The black abyss that swallows mankind whole.
    To feast on the flesh of mans weakness

    My soul was bound to a live of servitude.
    Never freed again to tasted the pleasures
    Of unburdened freedom, a life I led in vein
    Must please my addiction – A goddesses divine
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well very well written
     
  3. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    please please pretty please with lotsa candy on the top! put this to music? it would be beyond eic! :O
     
  4. Hellfrost

    Hellfrost Well-Known Member

    Thanks for the kind words. I have already written a better version though. I am never really happy about my writing lol. Although that version is not really suited for here, the language filter would go mental lol. Also i dont think many would enjoy the music to this.
     
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