A Happy Rhyme

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lilly, Feb 18, 2011.

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  1. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    The Sun was shining as i went out today
    So I grabbed a ball and i started to play.

    I threw it up high and back down it came
    I was having such fun with my beach ball game.

    I was having such fun that I failed to see
    Another girl who was staring at me.

    She gazed at the ball her eyes open wide
    She stood there so long I feared she would fry.

    For the sun was so hot it could do that you know
    But it was so nice after that season of snow.

    When I noticed her there I called to her "Come!"
    "Over to me and we can play some".

    Her eyes got so big that I feared they would POP!
    but then she came over and her walk had a HOP!

    We played and we played with my Big red beach ball
    until the day ended, so i suppose that is all.
  2. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    That, was something else, easily one of the best poems i have seen on here.

    Simple, beautifully written and so warm.

    Thank you.

    Thats what i love about poetry, it really is what you read into it.
  3. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    Im happy you enjoyed it =)
  4. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    I enjoyed it too.
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