A Life's Day

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Mar 1, 2011.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    A day to the start,
    A sun rising in the sky,
    The feeling never goes away.

    Pain away from home,
    Pain within the soul,
    The kind you cant chase away.

    The tears I shed,
    By no means are happy,
    The tears of pain I cry.

    I may look strong,
    Even harsh on the outside,
    It’s the only way I don’t cry.

    The pain of loneliness,
    The pain of tears,
    They are the reason for these cuts.

    If only they could see,
    That whole true reason,
    The thoughts that create the cuts.

    You will never know,
    The pain I know,
    I hope you never try.

    And when I’m gone,
    don’t feel alone,
    don’t even wonder why.
     
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thorn...I think I can begin to understand this type of pain, and know the depth it affects us...so sad, but so well written...thanks for sharing this...J
     
  3. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    thanks sadeyes, the support for poetry on here is great, as is the release of emotions that come with it.
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I often say that too if only others could see the real you inside. Thanks for writing and sharing some of you with us hugs
     
  5. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    if they understood the real me, maybe i wouldnt be looking at this item in my hand wondering if not to use it
     
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