a love poem i wrote for my bf.

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  1. blade

    blade Well-Known Member

    i wrote this for my boyfrind, and gave it to him.

    A special world for you and me
    A special bond one cannot see
    It wraps us up in its cocoon
    And holds us fiercely in its womb.

    Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
    Gently nestling us to the fold
    Like silken thread it holds us fast
    Bonds like this are meant to last.

    And though at times a thread may break
    A new one forms in its wake
    To bind us closer and keep us strong
    In a special world, where we belong.
     
  2. blade

    blade Well-Known Member

    and this other one:

    My love, I have tried with all my being
    to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
    but nothing seems worthy;

    I know now why Shakespeare could not
    compare his love to a summer’s day.
    It would be a crime to denounce the beauty
    of such a creature as thee,
    to simply cast away the precision
    God had placed in forging you.

    Each facet of your being
    whether it physical or spiritual
    is an ensnarement
    from which there is no release.
    But I do not wish release.
    I wish to stay entrapped forever.
    With you for all eternity.
    Our hearts, always as one.


    ps: i love poetry so i will post heaps if you dont mind.
     
  3. AloneInTheDark

    AloneInTheDark Well-Known Member

    They are beautiful :biggrin: Keep writing.
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I would be pleased and flattered to be the recipient of such lovely and loving thoughts.:smile:

    Nice work!:smile:

    least
     
  5. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Those poems were immersive. I encourage you to nurture that talent...
     
  6. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    OH MY! :cry: :clap: :clap:
     
  7. blade

    blade Well-Known Member

    There is a dime a dozen...
    Then there is one in a million...
    But baby, you are once in a lifetime.

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    A path winding across the horizon
    over mountains, across seas
    through blue skies and gray
    never ceasing, continuous.
    My love for you.
     
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