'A Pill'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Jan 26, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Searing words
    Heard
    Drafted breath
    Verbal death
    Misunderstood afflictions.
    No compromises
    Anger rises
    Self loathing contradictions.
    Vocal
    Amputation
    Painful
    Resolution
    Forceful
    Absolution
    Swallow
    Your pill.
    Chokeing
    Reality
    Smokeing
    They laugh at me -
    Makeing me Ill...
    Swelling
    Anger
    Compelling
    Danger
    They've taken my will.
    I've given the best of me -
    They've eaten the rest of me -
    And tossed me a pill.




    C
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Another lovely (especially read aloud) and astounding poem. :smile: You pack a lot of thought into very few words; a poetic trick that isn't easy. I often write too much then have to whittle it down a lot. Anyway, just want you to know I think greatly of your poetic talent. :biggrin:

    I always admire your works,

    Sooz xoxoxox
     
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    *bows*


    I think you might actually understand them...that worries me....

    thanks though...


    C
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Good poem :) I like it!
     
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