A pit

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sparrow91, Sep 22, 2013.

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  1. Sparrow91

    Sparrow91 Well-Known Member

    A pit.
    That's how my soul feels tonight.
    Deep and hollow like a dark cave ,
    it goes down to my core, deep down below
    Today I know it has gone very far down.
    I feel sadness arise in my mind like a cloud out in a summer sky.
    I can feel it clearly it won't go away
    what's wrong with me?
    Have I gone mad?
    Or maybe I am just sad
    Tell me my soul for I cannot fight it.
    It's down to far I can't even find it.
    Tell me please, maybe I can dream if only tonight , If only tonight .
    I want this feeling out of my sight.
    Close my eyes and feel it deep, deep in the flesh where the roses can bloom if only for a sec
    The waves of misery decide to rest.
    If only for a moment, definitely a moment.
    A moment in time where I can shine,
    feel whole for a minute and decide not to cry.
    A minute of freedom and a high to far up.
    I forget about that soul I left down below, to hard to find and miserable, alone.
  2. erasmus

    erasmus New Member

    I am so sorry for the feelings that inspired this poem, but I like the poem very much.
  3. Sparrow91

    Sparrow91 Well-Known Member

    Thank you Erasmus
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