A plea in death

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Deleted SKU, Jan 19, 2011.

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  1. Deleted SKU

    Deleted SKU Well-Known Member

    Plotting out the diagrams
    Look between the lines
    Everything is difficult
    A life left undefined
    Somewhere in the shadows sits
    Each answer that i seek
    Hidden in the darkness
    Every pathway is oblique
    Listen to the night time noise
    Perhaps a distant sound
    Might guide me to my destination
    Ease me from life unbound
    Let me fly for one last time
    In death I transcend strife
    Victory over this pain
    Ending this worthless life
     
  2. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    It's a beautiful poem and so terribly sad. I hope you can find a "pathway" to a beautiful life!
     
  3. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    keep looking at it.. the picture gets clearer.. its an amazingly touching poem.. :hug:
     
  4. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    Aww, that is suck a beautiful poem, sad indeed but you have expressed yourself in so many ways in this poem weldone. I hope you do learn to see the light side of things as there is always something to be happy about, take care x
     
  5. Deleted SKU

    Deleted SKU Well-Known Member

    I guess that's the thing really, even in the darkest times, when death seems a certainty... being able to say even that is hiding the same message... it's only when nothing is left at all to say when the fight stops. I guess sometimes its hard for others to even see that.

    I don't think the poem reads very well though. I knew what i wanted to try, but couldn't quite fit the words in with the message.
     
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