a poem from my fiancee to me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by whybother?, Feb 16, 2006.

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  1. whybother?

    whybother? Well-Known Member

    my fiancee was suppose to send this poem VIA post but the silly woman forgot to put it in the evolope so she sent an email instead , i really do love this poem i wish i cud write poems as good as her



    I'm writing this while lying in bed,
    Going over stuff we've done and everything we've said.
    Things that have ade us laugh and cry,
    Made us dirty, soppy and lovingly sigh.

    You're in my head every second of every minute of every day,
    The memories and future plans will never fade away,
    Our first meeting, first kiss, first 'special' things ;)
    Suggest quite clearly what the future brings:

    Happiness and marriage, concerts and holidays,
    Will bring us together in so many ways.
    You've helped me so much; more than you'll ever realise,
    By making me feel happy and even keeping me alive.

    Every hard time, you've always been there,
    To listen, to love and to show that you care,
    Through bullying, parents and suicide too,
    You always understand, and i know i can trust you.

    I wish i could make you the happiest man alive,
    You deserve the world in return for making me survive,
    But all i can offer is my undying love and dreams
    And to promise you I'll never ever leave.

    So when i gaze up into those baby blue eyes,
    To my hero who's saved me from danger,
    I can see even though you're a horny little devil,
    You'll always be my guardian angel.


    love ya darling!!!!!!!!!!

    nige
     
  2. Hazibell

    Hazibell Well-Known Member

    i am not a silly woman u cheeky git lol :tongue:
    u r lovely at writing poems darling :D i just had to say wat i felt hehe
    LOVE YOU!!!!
     
  3. gothic_spleen

    gothic_spleen Antiquities Friend

    that was a good poem...sweeeeet!!1!
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was such a sweet poem...

    I wish all the best to you guys!

    Love BP
     
  5. Hazibell

    Hazibell Well-Known Member

    aw thankies :D hehe
    my nige is shweet :D
    tc :D
    madz
     
  6. AloneInTheDark

    AloneInTheDark Well-Known Member

    What a lovely poem... =)

    Well done Madz!
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    lovely
     
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