A poem I wrote about 9 months ago

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by KupKate, Jul 14, 2014.

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  1. KupKate

    KupKate Member

    I wrote this poem as a song back last October and I figured I'd share. Maybe it'll encourage someone. Note that I write a lot so assuming I keep up with this site, expect more. Ignore the 'chorus' lines...again, this was originally a song. Er, lyrics to a song at least. I copied this straight from my Facebook page.


    Hush, little baby, don't you cry
    Don't hurt yourself, don't cry into the night
    Don't be scare, don't be afraid
    Don't let your life start to fade
    Don't listen to the lies that want you to drown
    Don't let the hurtful words bring you down

    You wanna be perfect, you wanna stay strong
    You wanna be smarter, you can't handle being wrong
    You wanna be loved for once in your life
    You wanna be saved from this endless night
    Why do you forget that someone loves you
    You can do it, you can see this through
    It'll be alright, just wait and see
    You may think your lights are dim, but they aren't to me

    Hush little baby, don't say a word
    I know how much it must hurt
    Don't give up hope just yet
    Try to look on the bright side instead
    Don't let go of your handhold
    Don't try to drown yourself in the flow


    Hush little baby, I'll come hold you
    You can't give up, you gotta see this through
    Don't let go, don't extinguish your lights
    You can make it through the night

  2. pisces1

    pisces1 Well-Known Member

    Very nice :D
  3. Concrete_Angel

    Concrete_Angel Forum Buddy

    Thats amazing! :hug:
  4. Twocky61

    Twocky61 Banned Member

    Brilliant KupKate :butterfly8: :butterfly6:
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