a poem i wrote to my girlfriend! ~ kenzie!

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by blade, Feb 29, 2008.

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  1. blade

    blade Well-Known Member

    we stood in the doorway
    his hands on my waist
    the clock tickling loudly
    almost in haste

    she moved in closer
    her eyes locked in mine
    I long for her kiss
    For just a moment in time

    her lips meet mine
    and I feel the sensation
    no longer must I wait
    to give into the sweet temptation

    my knees go weak
    my palms become sweaty
    I go back to that place
    I have been so many times already

    the world disappears
    all that's left is him and I
    and as we pull away
    I feel as though I could fly

    love u my baby girl!
  2. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    It is a very lovely poem hun, but there's something that confuses me, you say it's about you and your girlfriend, so who is "he"? :unsure:
  3. blade

    blade Well-Known Member

    im a feamle!
    im bi!
  4. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    I liked it!! :)
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