a poem i wrote

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by blackening, Aug 16, 2007.

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  1. blackening

    blackening Well-Known Member

    So many regrets, things i wish id done differently.
    Things i wish i hadnt said, times im sorry for being me..
    You seem farther away, than you did before,
    and why shouldnt you, when anyone can offer you more..
    I wish i told you, how i felt right at the start.
    Avoided the conflict and the broken heart..
    I think i tried to say 'im sorry',
    got the impression it meant nothing to you.
    I'd bare my soul to show my regrets,
    if i wasnt afraid you'd stare straight through..
    I should have tried to say 'I Love You',
    before life got in the way.
    I guess this is my apology,
    that you're not around to hear me say...

    :rose:​
     
  2. ari

    ari Staff Alumni

    Excellent writing, thanks for sharing...keep on writing, I find that it can soothe the soul
    ari
     
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Blackening,
    I love your poem. It is deep and it is very emotional. In some ways it is also very powerful. I love the way that you worded it and how you knew when to seperate one line from the next. I write poems but I think you did a better job then me on this one. If you ever need to talk I am only a pm away. Just send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as I get it. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  4. blackening

    blackening Well-Known Member

    thank you both, im glad you liked it, it means a lot to me to have something so personal to me approved by others, thank you
     
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