A poem I wrote

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by sadhart, Oct 3, 2011.

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  1. sadhart

    sadhart Well-Known Member

    There was this girl I liked and I got rejected in what felt in a very hurtful and somewhat insensitive way. Two years later, I am still hurting, and even though I have been hurt before, this one was different and I don't know why. Over the summer I wrote this poem about how I feel. I'm not good at poetry writing so please forgive me. It's called "Hate filled Hurt"

    It hurts so bad each and everyday
    I want very much for the pain to go away
    My feelings for you werevery mcuh real
    Yet the same ones I had you did not feel
    I want to hate you so bad
    Because your hurtful words made me feel so sad
    This poem I know is stupid so true
    Yet it was this or die...what was I to do
    I just want this pain to go away
    Because it hurts knowing you don't care day after day
    Yet everyday my heart shatters all over again
    and everyday I know this pain will always be in vain
  2. BeautifullyChaotic

    BeautifullyChaotic Well-Known Member

    I can feel your pain in this, and that is what poetry is meant to do, make the reader feel. Give yourself more credit, it's an art and the more you write the better it gets. It's also very therapeutic, and a great way to vent.
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