A Riddle For You,

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThinkingCap, Jan 7, 2012.

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  1. ThinkingCap

    ThinkingCap Well-Known Member

    Technically a riddle is a poem, so I put it here. I wrote this for a friend but thought that you all might enjoy taking a swing at it as well. Just post your guess below it if you'd like :)

    When you touch me,
    I come alive.
    The spell of your fingers
    pulls me from silence and
    into your thrumming body
    whose beat I sing
    to feel your life
    reverberating in my own.
    And as you inevitably fall away,
    whether up or down,
    I drop into monotone once again.
    What am I?

    You could even write your own, it's a lot of fun!

    --ThinkingCap
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    wow i thought perhaps some kind musical instrument hun
     
  3. ThinkingCap

    ThinkingCap Well-Known Member

    Close, but not nearly as artistic as you would expect. The best thing about riddles is that they're usually about things you don't think twice about. :)
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    my first thought was a keyboard of a computer
     
  5. ThinkingCap

    ThinkingCap Well-Known Member

    Nope, that's not what I had in mind, though it makes perfect sense. But does a keyboard make a noise that can go 'monotone'?
     
  6. meaningless-vessel

    meaningless-vessel Well-Known Member

    I'm thinking something kitchen based like a fridge or maybe a central heating system.
     
  7. Aaron

    Aaron Well-Known Member

    Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want by The Smiths....beautiful though.
     
  8. Madsys

    Madsys Active Member

    the heart? that was my first thought...
     
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