A Short Rhyme

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, Apr 27, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    A sweet voice just floats above my head,
    A look for a singer brings me to you instead.

    To that velvety voice, to that beautiful smile,
    To that one woman who knows her style.

    You looked this way and I simply ensnared
    Then you walked this way with a sultry stare.
    This one is a short one, to get it out of my mind... PLease comment if you enjoyed this story. Please give me your ideas. Your comments are the reason I write and I need ideas to create these stories. Thanks.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    cute like the words you use to describe her hugs
  3. mulberrypie

    mulberrypie Well-Known Member

    aw, i like it! its cute
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I like it too :heart:
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