A Sleepy Kind of Love { By Isa }

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  1. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    A Sleepy Kind Of Love

    I lie, half submerged in the sand,
    My fingertips buried so the dirty pebbles,
    Inch under my soft pink nails.

    Sleep is a rose,
    It ripples out and devours me.

    Asleep in this dusty day dream,
    As the breezy lapse of waves,
    Swifts over my hot and seasoned skin.

    A soft halo tenders me from the sweet half light,
    The careless tapering moon quivers.

    Ah, Moon, I simper, hair strewn wildly filtering through the rocks,
    Moon is me and I am the moon and will I be gone when the sun comes back?

    Enchanted morning breaking on the cliff,
    Of a desperate heart that clings to the roots of its saviour,
    Even if it rips it from its rest.

    So I rest,
    So I rest.
    Dear Moon, and dear light that serves me this warmth of glow,
    On happy hour at dawn.

    Darling to those who wash over me,
    Those who taste these words and feel them sour.

    Bitterly I write to you,
    Thrown in sand and line of right and sea,
    Left and sand,
    A century passes but I am lain here,
    Surrendered to the mesmerizing skies above me.

    And defiantly seduced.

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  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Oh, wow! :eek:hmy:

    You = full of charming talent. :rose:
  3. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    *giggles* This is my only talent, well I believe im talented at this... who knows
  4. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    :yes: thou art.

    Well done, CFG™

  5. RunningAway

    RunningAway Well-Known Member

    Gosh. I wish I could write even a quarter as well as you. Well done :)
  6. amroth

    amroth Active Member

    Nice poem, I love the imagery you use, you do have a great talent. The words slip off your tongue in a beautiful manor as you read this. I really love this poem. =)
  7. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Thanks guys *blushes*
  8. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    Well written, I like it. :smile:
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