A song I wrote about suicide

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  1. anarulesmenow

    anarulesmenow Well-Known Member

    I dont think its that good but my band decided to use it.


    "Door opens, down the corridor she goes,
    Looks from all sides of the rooms,
    Ignore them,Ignore them,Ignore them whispering to herself
    It's so hard to walk now, she says to herself
    Its so hard to smile now, she screams silently
    And anyday i might...just...

    Collapse!Alarms,sirens,Darkness...

    This may be it, this may be her dream fulfilled,
    Rush rush rush, into the building,
    Beep beep beep, hook the machines up
    Keep her going for now

    This is the price that life takes,
    When death takes the place of life,
    30 pills in her stomach,
    It's so hard to breathe now, they think
    It's so hard to have hope now,she screams
    And maybe I'm glad...

    This may be it, this may be her dream fulfilled,
    Rush rush rush, into the building,
    Beep beep beep, hook the machines up
    And she's gone

    I just needed you to know she screams,
    As she fades away,
    Get yourself back to reality."
     
  2. innocencexisxlove

    innocencexisxlove Well-Known Member

    oo. its deep. i like it a lot:)
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Awesome song :hug:
     
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