a song i wrote

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  1. Danny Crooks

    Danny Crooks Well-Known Member

    Verse 1

    Like Joshua Ballard I feel like you've broken my life,
    A token moment of insanity had me hoping you might..!
    I devoted my life to you, you know that I'm right, ..
    But as you throw me aside I can see you're provoking a fight...
    All joking aside, I believe that you're invoking a guise, ..
    To cloak you at night, concealing an emotional height...
    A noticeable plight, and now I'm lonely aching forever, ..
    Unknowing when i'll be over you, but maybe it's never...
    Our relationship severed after changes were measured, ..
    But there were so many good times, we were crazy together...
    I hold regrets to my chest, which I'll be taking to Heaven, ..
    And I aint gonna say your name 'cos your name's in dilEmma...
    You can hate me, whatever, but it won't be reciprocated, ..
    Im sickly fading into the background, I bet your happy now...
    Make up running like a saddened clown, but why may I ask?
    You turn to me and say "even ice maidens have a heart"...
    What?



    Chorus (X2)

    With every breath I breathe, Yeah i love you, still..
    It's with every ounce of grief that I love you, still...
    Every step I take is 'cos I love you, still...
    I recognise mistakes babe, I love you, still...


    Verse 2

    I'm sorry if I hurt you, that was never my intention, ..
    It feels now the arguments were a clever intervention...
    Full of temper and aggression we proceeded to tear strips, ..
    off of one another, .. throwing everything from hair clips...
    To a tray of unprepared chips, lookin back in reflection, ..
    It seems so fuckin petty, in fact .. Can I mention...
    That I'd usually be the one to storm off, slammin' doors, ..
    It's lucky you didnt drive, cos if i aint got a car I'da damaged yours!!...
    We had massive wars, but it aint like it was only awful, ..
    We'd scrimp & save in our skintness, we were so resourceful...
    With total caution we'd spend our nights playing cards, ..
    Kickin a football around, times like that did make us laugh...
    Plenty of people came round to visit us, ..
    We'd cover up the cracks which were developin so hideous...
    Like a couple of idiots we ignored what would be our demise, ..
    And when the laughter died, we were left with shards of ice...
    Where our eyes had frozen over, our love was cold & sober, ..
    We had negligected everything we were'nt supposed to...
    Like a movie poster, the story's in a single picture, ..
    no trips into fiction or even mis-description...
    It's like we flicked a switch and lived out our days in darkness, ..
    With blatant hardships, you called me names such as "bastard"...
    It's down to tardiness, I guess we weren't prepared to try, ..
    Both of us guilty, maybe we were to scared to fly...
    from the nest we created, so therefore is it best that we waited?, ..
    With breath that was baited, until we couldn't wrestle our hatred...
    And one of said "I wish we had never met or have dated"..??, ..
    Now we know the answer, and I guess the lesson's belated...
    Much less a mistake, more like a curve of learning, ..
    I said "I Love You" so much the words were burning, ..
    From the depths of my soul until it ruptured my spirit, ..
    I guess I'm tryna say babe that I'm still in love with you, innit...
     
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