about the razor

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Izziebabystar, Sep 9, 2008.

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  1. Izziebabystar

    Izziebabystar Well-Known Member

    well i know the words
    but i dont realy speak them to you
    and i hide all the that ive
    gained with my wisdom from you
    when you look at my face
    does it seem, just as ugly to you??
    i cant seem to erase all the scars
    that ive lived with from you. . .
    its not easy to hide all this dammage inside
    ill carry it with me till im not alive
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

  3. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    hugs izzie
  4. Datsik

    Datsik Forum Buddy

    That was awesome. Some grammar mistakes, but it was a good poem. It really showed how you're feeling ATM.

    :hug: Izzie.
  5. Izziebabystar

    Izziebabystar Well-Known Member

    there was suposed to be mistakes
    to show
    people aint purfect
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