about the razor

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Izziebabystar, Sep 9, 2008.

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  1. Izziebabystar

    Izziebabystar Well-Known Member

    well i know the words
    but i dont realy speak them to you
    and i hide all the that ive
    gained with my wisdom from you
    when you look at my face
    does it seem, just as ugly to you??
    i cant seem to erase all the scars
    that ive lived with from you. . .
    its not easy to hide all this dammage inside
    ill carry it with me till im not alive
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
  3. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    hugs izzie
     
  4. Datsik

    Datsik Forum Buddy

    That was awesome. Some grammar mistakes, but it was a good poem. It really showed how you're feeling ATM.

    :hug: Izzie.
     
  5. Izziebabystar

    Izziebabystar Well-Known Member

    eli
    there was suposed to be mistakes
    to show
    people aint purfect
     
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