About to crash

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Dudly, Jun 19, 2009.

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  1. Dudly

    Dudly Well-Known Member

    I want too fly the plane
    Even though it'll crash
    I want to soar
    Will you fly with me?
    Go for a dash
    Even though I'll crash?
    Its not you, its me
    You've heard my price
    Still wana go for a flash?
    I care about you
    But I'm gonna crash
    I have feelings for you
    But were gonna smash
    On the rocky turbulence
    Of our possible relationship

    "Jordan, why are you using a plane manual for relationship advice?"

    Cause in the end
    You will hate me
    I can never love myself
    So no one can ever love me
    Still, I want that thrill
    Too seek the skies
    And feel new experiences
    Even though,
    what comes up, must come down
    The rocks await us my love.

    Just a quick ...."poem" if you want call it that. Underlining my thoughts of late. I don't have time to fix it up but there it is.
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: good poem,thanks for sharing!
  3. johnson8681

    johnson8681 Well-Known Member

    Great poem!:goodone:
  4. Remedy

    Remedy Chat & Forum Buddy

    Great poem, thank you for sharing it with us. :arms:
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