Absense of reason(May trigger)

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  1. Archon

    Archon Well-Known Member

    As the month went b and the year changer season
    I longer saw any reason
    With all this bottled up rage and hate
    Was it time to except my morbid fate?

    Fate is cruel, twisted and unkind
    The roof and ceiling already lined
    A kcik of a chair ends a life
    But also puts many people in strife.

    Sadness, and cruelty are all that exist
    For now i see no reason to persist.
    Long ago there was once a reason
    But it passed sooner than a season.
    -Archon
     
  2. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    "A kcik of a chair ends a life"

    My favorite part, it gave me a chill.

    I suggest proof-reading this, it would be easier to understand. I can post a corrected version if you'd like. :)
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I hope you find another reason to just stay lots of people care here abt you stay and see what unfolds as each day presents itself. stay safe.
     
  4. Archon

    Archon Well-Known Member

    I probably should double check my peoms but it's a bit hard when i write them late at night.

    Corected version, i think.

    As the month went by and the year changer season
    I longer saw any reason
    With all this bottled up rage and hate
    Was it time to except my morbid fate?

    Fate is cruel, twisted and unkind
    The roof and ceiling already lined
    A kick of a chair ends a life
    But also puts many people in strife.

    Sadness, and cruelty are all that exist
    For now i see no reason to persist.
    Long ago there was once a reason
    But it passed sooner than a season.
    -Archon
     
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