Acting out my life.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Menchi, Jul 22, 2009.

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  1. Menchi

    Menchi Well-Known Member

    After talking to people in the chat room a little while back, i decided to give this writing lark a go again... i've not written anything creative in a long time, so i know this isn't so great (too short, capitalisation where it shouldn't be and stuff), but the first step is the hardest i guess.


    To live a life in spotlight stage
    A life that turns on every page
    A story that you all can read
    A tale to tell, i will concede
    Might entertain, but please i say
    To you who watch this bitter play
    Of hope thats dashed, and pain that flows
    Through every chapter in this prose
    Just to remember that each tear
    Shed alone in hopeless fear
    Is not just there to entertain
    I live this life, i live this pain
     
  2. mandyj101

    mandyj101 Well-Known Member

    powerful poem .. :hug:
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Moving poem :arms:
     
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