All the channels

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by pit, Jan 29, 2010.

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  1. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    There now.
    You have all the channels you ever want,
    Thousands.
    But wait.
    I see some gaps in your programming,
    Blue on most every screen I flip through.
    That's quite a large gap.
    Life is poking through,
    See that, Alice?
    Life is poking it's lumpy hands through.
    Quick, grab a rag or a towel
    To stop this Real Life from pouring through.
    How the fuck you gonna
    Block out Life without all the channels?
    Oh, wait a minute.
    There's a button on this remote that takes care of it?
    That did the trick.
    We're all better now, thank you.
     
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like how you have created a scene here good one.
     
  3. Vangelis

    Vangelis Well-Known Member

    Good imagery and ambiance with your words.
     
  4. PerfectlyMurdered

    PerfectlyMurdered Well-Known Member

    Wow! I really like this poem, the way you worded it made me imagine it very well.
     
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Thanx, guys!


    :yay:
     
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