All you

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MyFilm, Dec 31, 2006.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. MyFilm

    MyFilm Member

    What do you think
    This is some crying game
    That im weak and feeble
    Lonely and lame

    You stand on your box
    All high and mighty
    Proud of you efforts
    Like fucking aphrodite

    The one whos words spoken
    A well composed mutter
    The one you writes me
    Should be in the gutter

    Its been a game all along
    You were winning with me
    I dont mind losing
    If it makes you happy you see

    I care for the OTHERS
    Not you or me
    I may use short words
    So please mock me

    You think its all you
    Thats as far as you see
    I write these words LOUD
    As a warning for ME!
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it!:smile:

  3. MyFilm

    MyFilm Member

    Thank you

    Im queit shy really and find it hard to express myself in words but I thought I would give it a go.
  4. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member



  5. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

  6. MyFilm

    MyFilm Member

    Click Click Marcia?

    do you have something to say?

    Im just writting words about MY feelings....
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.