Alone. pt.2

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, May 8, 2007.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Six
    walls -
    ungiving, unforgiving,
    surround like battlements
    (protection. rejection.)
    to keep the world out.

    or lock in the beast?
    misunderstood
    mistake,
    not even knowing how to
    look the enemy in the eye
    for a
    lie.
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it, especially the last four lines.

    Very well put.:smile:
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.