Alone

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BornFree, Apr 14, 2013.

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  1. BornFree

    BornFree Well-Known Member

    Alone is where I am
    Alone is how I feel
    Where no words can
    soothe or change what is real

    Body broken and full of pain
    heart isolated no words can change
    Unreachable, removed, care cursary
    Are you friend or adversary?

    Pain of the heart so intense
    Our relationship in tatters
    nothing else makes sense
    Children are all that matters

    Were I not like this would you
    still be here pretend to care
    all my hopes & dreams no longer true
    I reach out for you but you're not there

    You deserve more, somehow better
    all answers solutions out of reach
    do I reach out, try, in a letter
    or resign, no strength to beseech...
     
  2. elevatorpass

    elevatorpass Active Member

    lovely stuff... concise and emotive.. :)
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Hugs to you hun children are what keeps me here too hun Perhaps write a letter hun even if you don't send it write it ok it helps to release the thoughts and the pain and sadness hugs
     
  4. morning rush

    morning rush Well-Known Member

    very nice poem :) I could totally see myself in this
     
  5. soulreaper

    soulreaper Well-Known Member

    love this part... had you not said children I would have not know you had children

    --->Are you friend or adversary?

    Pain of the heart so intense
    Our relationship in tatters
     
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