alone...

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  1. Lonely is a place
    of undying echoes,
    where anguish is crying to be heard
    yet all I hear are my own words,
    scorning my soul
    with each refrain ~
    Alone, as I slowly forget my name,
    trapped in this moment
    that will not cease,
    I beg for my release
    but only these echoes remain,
    left to send to
    nowhere…
    And even God does not care
    but mocks me in my grief,
    cursing all my past belief.
    For torturing me in all my hope,
    instead I only learn
    this despair I have not earned
    is now all that I may own
    No, not even sighs escape
    this damnable place ~
    I am alone…
    alone…

    alone.

    FAL1
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow such another amazing poem from you...

    BP
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    No, you're not alone, you only FEEL alone. We are here with you, holding you up, delighting in your beautiful expressions of our feelings, reaching out to you to keep you from being alone. Love you always,

    your friend,

    least
     
  4. Flatliner

    Flatliner Guest

    "Alone, as I slowly forget my name,
    trapped in this moment
    that will not cease,
    I beg for my release
    but only these echoes remain,"


    Perfection. Breathtaking. Amazing.
     
  5. *sigh* ---
    I've been here since March -
    I still cannot get over how totally surreal it is to be praised for expressing pain,
    as much as it is so appreciated (oh God, another reason to cry...)

    Thank you...
    FAL1
     
  6. Porcelain

    Porcelain Well-Known Member

    I think the praise is more for being able to express in words what everyone else is feeling but cannot seem to say. Almost like a spokesperson perhaps?
     
  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I think Porcelain has hit the nail on the head...


    least
     
  8. "I think Porcelain has hit the nail on the head..."

    I feel I've handed our petitions to God
    on a humble silver platter, over and again,
    with the talent I was given,
    knowing of, and expressing both light and dark
    I've tried to make my mark ~
    But my pleas remain unheard
    Forgive me please my lack of worth...


    FAL1
     
  9. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear FAL1;

    You DO have worth, you're just too depressed to see it right now. You have worth TO ME, if that means anything! I love you, girl. Just lean on us and get thru this. We'll carry you as far as needed.

    lots of love and hugs and hope,

    least
     
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