Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by overwhleming, Oct 17, 2006.

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  1. overwhleming

    overwhleming Active Member

    emptiness, emptiness, emptiness
    when nothing comes
    life is empty
    all hopes forgetten, all tomorrow lost
    madness transcends eternity like wounded fire
    springt in the heart of beast
    desolated land desolated wounds
    heart of gold tarnished
    spring eyes dulls under autumn leaves
    what can be traded for life of lost?
    empty promise and sullen eyes
    take me forth
    and cut me thousand pieces
    scatter them' cuz i dunno know where they lays
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    An interesting read... thanks for sharing.

  3. I'm sorry you feel so lost and empty. Many of us here know it too well. You expressed it just fine - continue to write...

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