Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by blacktears, Jul 2, 2009.

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  1. blacktears

    blacktears Member

    What they hey, might as well post one instead of making y'all go through a link. This one is called "Amen" (as seen in the title). let me know what you think?
    Oh...may trigger?

    Echoes in the room, while I silently cry,
    Louder, louder growing still, echoing goodbye.
    Silently suffering I am so alone, who can help me now,
    Here I cry in the darkness, making my last vow,
    Of no goodbyes, no tearful eyes, no looking at my past,
    There is not time for the tears; I must now do it fast,
    And join the echoes of silent goodbyes, and all those silent tears,
    Mixing with the sweet melody, of people through the years.
    So I dry my tears, they will not fall, on this earth again,
    So please Dear Lord, hear my prayer, before I say Amen.
    Blessed Jesus, Gracious God, please forgive my sins,
    I know that soon after death, life only just begins,
    So please O Lord, hear me out, I know that I have failed,
    I know that I am not the best; I keep my life so veiled,
    I’ve sinned and failed and turned away, straying far from you,
    Now I’m here with my dry eyes, my death feels overdue,
    I’ve tried and failed, and tried again, just to finally fall,
    And now Lord Jesus, precious Lamb, Death has made it’s call,
    Please help those I’ve left behind, I didn’t mean to mar,
    Don’t let me echo in their minds, Don’t let me leave a scar.
    This isn’t their fault, they tried their best, I was just too deep,
    Let their mourning for me be short, for they don’t have to weep,
    Please accept me in your glory, into heaven above,
    Please don’t let my death make you, take away your love.
    Now time grows short, Dawn will break, now I must fade away,
    The sun will shine, the dew will sparkle, I’ll smile upon this day,
    At the glorious gates above, in your ever-present care,
    No tears shall fall from the darkness, there will not be despair,
    So Blessed Jesus, Gracious God, don’t let me fail again,
    So please Dear Lord, hear this prayer, now I say Amen.
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  2. triggs

    triggs Account Closed

    wow :hug: that's amazing hun xx
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :hug:

    Thanks for sharing!
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    A beautiful poem a beautiful prayer thanks mary
  5. blacktears

    blacktears Member

    thanks all :)
  6. Leiaha

    Leiaha Well-Known Member

    That is a truly beautiful poemx xx
  7. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    They will be marred by your pain and pain will not leave it has never left me so try to hold on for them please. I know your in pain please reach out to your doctors psych anyone change up your meds but don't give in
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