Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by saint6, Mar 17, 2008.

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  1. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    we fight for our freedom
    the freedom that we once earned
    that we once died for
    but our government was to greedy
    so we stare into their eyes
    seeing nothing but black
    and i ask..
    are these the people teaching us about war?
    if this is so i will die to take them out
    die not for patriotism..
    but humanity

    i know i suck at this shit but whatever it makes me feel good.
  2. I don't think it sucks at all!!

    ...It's full of irony (which I love), but I admit I'm confused about if this is directed at a certain group, and if it is - whose "humanity" you would die for... (plz 'splain - PM me if ya wanna) :smile:
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