And so...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, May 9, 2006.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    Fast approaching,
    haunting waves.
    Running cautiously,
    the fact remains.
    Forever scared,
    you're never alone.
    They are always there
    watching you turn to stone.
    And so, it begins.
    The cycles of fear,
    weary eyes,
    wanting to run,
    but you turn to ice.
    Can't escape.
    You struggle to stay.
    Can't get out.
    And so, it continues.
    Run! Run!
    As fast as you can.
    Get out! Get out!
    Scream so loud.
    Top of your voice.
    Reach for the surface.
    Sprint for freedom.
    While you still can.
    And so, it's nearing.
    Feeling lethargic.
    Empty and tired.
    Shaking inside,
    you can't take anymore.
    You fall to the ground.
    They're right on your tail.
    You try to get up,
    but to no avail.
    And so... it ends.
     
  2. Wicked...

    That covers so many aspects
    of so many topics
    All toxic, but we know the feeling
    leave us reeling.

    FAL1
     
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    its great for so many reasons, but i love how you can put any situation to this poem, and it fits perfectly...

    Great Job hun...

    BP
     
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