Angels breath.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Shadowplay, Jan 18, 2008.

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  1. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    Something that started off as another song, now i don't know what it is... I'll let you decide.

    black eye and blackened heart, broken back right from the start.
    sick stomach and messed up head, both needing to be fed.
    with cracked lips and bleeding smile, its been a little while,
    since I seen you here, since I seen you here.

    angels breath makes me puke,

    leaky eyes just like a sieve, my arms about to give.
    my lungs are clogged again, hope its not the bends.
    broke, broken, braking, break, all the bones begin to ache,
    somethings gonna give, somethings gonna give.

    angels feathers make me sneeze,

    sour fate and sour frown, don't your food touch the ground.
    glowing face, and radiant smile, take a break for a while.
    under worked and over done, wish i were a better son,
    than i've ever been, than i've ever been.

    angels eyes eat through me,

    all in all its quite the fall,
    from where i am to where you are.
    all in all its quite the fall,
    from where you are to where i am.
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Seriously, that is *&%#ing awesome. The very last stanza is my favorite!
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    really really nice, love it
     
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