Animalisitic ***triggering***

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  1. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    I have recently had an admin delete all my poetry, i have had really bad paranoia thinking that my poems would be taken. I have written this today and really really want to share it so...

    Animalistic




    She stares across the room looking at the man
    Her eyes meet his and she can't put her finger on it
    But she knows him
    from somewhere
    His eyes bore deep within her
    His eyes gaze from hers wandering
    lingering
    gazing up and down then meeting back again
    he locks his eyes on hers and it hits her
    she knows him
    the panic
    the hatred
    it manifests itself into an animalistic urge
    to jump across that room and tear his heart out
    her breath starts to become ragged
    her heart beating so profusely
    she feels as if it's going to burst
    the memories, the memories flood her mind
    her tears start falling effortlessly
    she looks across the room again
    he's still staring at her as if knowing
    as if remembering that moment
    as if savoring it and relishing in his power
    he enjoys feeding off her fear now
    still staring at him his lips upturned
    into a smile so evil, a smile so tainted
    animalistic and hungry for the fear
    she looks around frantically
    looking for someone who can help her
    but there's no one
    it's just him and her and his smile
    she collapses to her knees
    hands shaking she covers her eyes
    she rocks back and forth begging
    begging for him to go away
    begging for it to stop
    she opens her eyes and looks across the room
    and he is gone
    just a figment of a tortured soul
    memories never letting go
    their grip so tight it chokes
    she looks around and people are staring at her
    wondering what the crazy girl is doing on her knees
    crying, shaking, convulsing in fear
    no one will ever know
    will never see
    the tortured remains of a girl raped by fear
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Kanani,
    Oh sweetie I am so sorry if this is what happened to you and how you are feeling. This poem is very deep and emotional. It also shows a lot of power in it. I am so glad that you decided to share it with us. I am here if you ever need to talk. I am only a pm away sweetheart. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    :hug: x54651784651651684846 kellz. :wub: ya.
     
  4. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Thank you both, was not going to post it because of the fears but upon asking someone they said i should post it. So thanks for the comments.
     
  5. Whitewolf

    Whitewolf Well-Known Member

    You can write well and with the full weight of your emotions, but the price you paid for that is unforgivable. Take care :cool:
     
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