Another Day Lost

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by sadangel, Jan 23, 2012.

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  1. sadangel

    sadangel Active Member

    Another day lost in the sea of tears,
    I cry and cry for help but it falls on deaf ears,
    I think and I beg and I pray
    for god to take the pain away,
    Here I sit with computer in hand
    hoping to make someone understand
    I feel the weight of sadness more that ever
    and no one to help me face this endeavor,
    Another day lost in pain,
    another day goes down the drain
    I am so tired and weak
    My life is becoming bleak
    GOD kill me take me away
    don't let me wait another day,
    Kill me quickly or kill me slowly,
    Just don't let me wait another day!!!
     
  2. treasureBelle

    treasureBelle Member

    Wow. You've just articulated how I feel.
    I write poetry too, and I love this one. It's a brilliant, heartfelt poem. You've just captured how I feel... although I rarely cry. I've gotten too good at holding it in. :(
     
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