Another for my son..(currently untitled)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Songie, Jul 24, 2012.

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  1. Songie

    Songie Well-Known Member

    What do you do
    when your world falls apart
    Your hopes and dreams die
    along with your fragile heart
    Memories hold strong
    a movement, a heartbeat
    Ultrasound pictures and cravings
    before your mind's defeat
    Hospital rooms and nurses
    IVs and pain
    the day I lost you
    The day i went insane
    The memories flood me
    so much confusion and fear
    But the one thing i knew
    was that you'd no longer be here
    No bedtime stories
    or kisses goodnight
    But i couldn't do anything
    not even put up a fight
    Your face haunts me
    a ghost of the past
    Reminding me of things so wonderful
    That weren't able to last
    How do i move on?
    How do i stop the tears?
    When i feel like I'm suffocating
    Surrounded my smoke and mirrors.

    --Untitled for now, suggestions welcome--
  2. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    Truly moving, I cannot even begin to fathom the depth of your sorrow. :hug:
  3. Songie

    Songie Well-Known Member

    Thanks <3
  4. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    such a sad but beautiful poem :hug:
    I lost my son but he was an adult..
    my heart goes out to you.
  5. TheLoneWolf

    TheLoneWolf Well-Known Member

    My heart goes out to both of you :hug:
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