Another pathetic poem written for crap's sake..

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by expressive_child, Jul 24, 2007.

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  1. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    Come and dance with me down the road
    But if you like it, we’ll hope like toads!

    Come with me and we’ll have ice-creams
    In the rain, we will swim in the streams!

    I guess I like you, because you’re pretty
    I guess I love you, because you’re lovely!

    I don’t care if they think that I am stupid
    So what? I got blessings from stupid cupid!

    In people's eyes, I am just a stupid fool
    In my foolish eyes, you are so beautiful!

    I have never even thought of being a father
    But I think you are adorable like hamsters!

    In my life, everything just couldn’t be better
    Being in love with you is what really matters!

    I will remember to say everyday;'I love you'
    I might be forgetful, still, my heart is true!

    Guess I won't be a wealthy man, oh it's true
    All I ever know;I am madly in love with you...
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  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    the talk of toads and ice cream hehe.

    did you write this?
  3. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    Haha...yeah I wrote this. Actually I was inspired by a quote from Richard Valery 'Love is being stupid together'.

    So from this quote, I got the idea of writing a simple rhyming poem and this is the result..
  4. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    That's cute. :smile:
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