another poem in my attempt to explain..

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Pink Teardrops, May 25, 2010.

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  1. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    In the moment
    everything stops
    The body's nerves begin to shake
    you feel yourself slip away
    to fight......what for?
    looking around, maybe
    maybe to avoid, some distraction
    hopeless
    You're falling
    There are no thoughts, no control
    no space, no time!!
    Sitting there
    it cannot be fought
    I will not fight

    I'm sinking....slowly being swallowed...
    becoming
    A zombie, a ghost
    that pierce, that grind
    which blade?
    I can feel it
    that screaming pain

    and yet it doesn't hurt

    letting go, holding on
    you stand still...
    The world around settles...
    Breath!!
    What have I done?
    oh but it wasn't me!
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    your poem explains vividly the loss of control the pain and sadness in your soul the confusion i am sorry you are in that place hope with therapy your poems will become ones of healing
     
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