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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FrainBart, Jun 12, 2012.

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  1. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    (should really name a few)

    I look upon the world with broken eyes
    and see the poisons flowing
    hate, despair, lies and pain,
    are flooding thick and fast
    Tidal waves come crashing
    dragging to its depths
    swallowing down the smallest souls
    in deep dark embrace.

    I listen to the world with deafened ears
    and hear the screaming, piercing.
    Begging, pleading, crying, screaming
    all but a whisper from the skies
    Tidal waves come crashing
    dragging to its depths
    swallowing down the biggest hearts
    in deep dark embrace.

    I feel the world of broken dreams
    shattering its hope
    Cutting, burning, falling, dying
    Drowned in a blood red sea.
    Tidal waves come crashing
    dragging to its depths
    Swallowing down the best of us
    in deep dark embrace.
     
  2. NYJmpMaster

    NYJmpMaster Have a question? Message Me Staff Member Forum Owner ADMIN

    Very powerful and well written - as always I might add.. Thank you
     
  3. FrainBart

    FrainBart Staff Alumni

    Thank you, I am still unsure on it, last bit doesnt flow enough.
     
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