Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by carwreckblonde, Jan 16, 2012.

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  1. the words are spilling out
    your mouth goes dry
    you look like your about to cry
    shedding a tear
    you wipe away what was said
    until it disappears.

    it didnt matter you were in pain
    didnt matter that you wouldnt
    say a name,
    it was all game.
    inside your head
    the thoughts lay their
    dormant but never dead.

    you tried to speak your mind
    you were declined
    for sharing your thoughts and feelings
    always leaving
    but pursuing the reason.

    you needed answers
    you asked the questions
    never ending story
    but he put the lies to perfection.

    no where to go
    no where to hide
    no where to escape my frame of mind.
  2. Tmacster1

    Tmacster1 Well-Known Member

    Nice Poem. :) I felt like I should respond to this one because no one else did. I also don't want you to feel left out - overall a well written poem.
  3. thank you :) , i dont mind. i only write them to make myself feel better!
  4. Tmacster1

    Tmacster1 Well-Known Member

    That's good at least you found an outlet that makes you feel better. Keep posting them if they do make you feel better. :hug:

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