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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BelovedDreamer, Nov 22, 2006.

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  1. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    It suddenly occurred to me
    that it was sad, or that maybe
    I should be a little worried,
    over the fact that my mother
    was so happy to hear me
    laughing about something.
    When had that happened?
    Somewhere along the way,
    between here and there,
    that part of me got lost.
    That part of me that knew
    what it meant to be spontaneous,
    to laugh out of the blue,
    like a surprise.
     
  2. Yeah baby... when did we lose that. *sigh*

    And how shocking it is for someone outside of us to notice

    That was powerful for me...

    FAL1
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dearly Beloved;

    I like this one a lot!!:smile: :smile: :smile: Thank you for sharing!

    love,

    least
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Awesome poem sweetie xxx
     
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