Ashes

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shadowheart, Apr 24, 2014.

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  1. shadowheart

    shadowheart Well-Known Member

    Innocence taken away.
    A shadow of agony as memories bleed.
    Once we tasted heaven,
    wide-eyed and hand in hand,
    but my love has perished.
    In a sickening vision of darkness –
    love is followed by death, death followed by blood,
    A life burnt to ashes in a haze of sorrow,
    I still miss you.
     
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  2. morning rush

    morning rush Well-Known Member

    wow very nice. I like it a lot. You have a knack for describing and showing a visual of what you write.
     
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