'Away From Me'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Aug 15, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I've been gone awhile
    I have returned
    Less the smile
    That used to occur
    I left it where
    Jealousy's birds
    Could peck and pick
    Prune the laughter
    That was never really heard.

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    ...as always, perfect in expression and so so read-aloudable!:smile: You never cease to amaze me with your writings. There are few words left to describe how I feel about your poetry (without being redundant or getting a much larger and more comprehensive thesaurus:wink: )

    I hope you are doing as well as can be expected, if not better. I admire your talent but commiserate with you on the sorrow that brings forth these works of word-art.

    much love,

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