'Away From Me'

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Aug 15, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I've been gone awhile
    I have returned
    Less the smile
    That used to occur
    I left it where
    Jealousy's birds
    Could peck and pick
    Prune the laughter
    That was never really heard.


    ~C
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    (((Curtius)))

    ...as always, perfect in expression and so so read-aloudable!:smile: You never cease to amaze me with your writings. There are few words left to describe how I feel about your poetry (without being redundant or getting a much larger and more comprehensive thesaurus:wink: )

    I hope you are doing as well as can be expected, if not better. I admire your talent but commiserate with you on the sorrow that brings forth these works of word-art.

    much love,

    least
     
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